Friends are one of the main reasons which help us drive our entire life merrily. They are the ones who stand by our sides in every occasion of good and bad days. They contribute to large part of one’s memories. There are some people who love spending most of their lives with just one or two close friends. This brings deepness in their relationship throughout their lives and their bond of friendship is strengthened as they are able to give more quality time towards one another. These small group of friends never separates in the lifetime and are like small family, which participates in every activity of one's life. For instance when an individual has limited friends he is able to spend his time with them more often. In every plan they make like playing, partying, trekking, the complete group attends that. Moreover, even when any of the friend parts away to some other country or due to other reasons they all still can remain in contact through cell phones or other sources and share their life experiences and help each other in case of any need. Furthermore, limited friend circle even gives an edge to all friends to share each other grief’s and experiences without hiding anything from them.
However, having large group of friends limits the members of the circle to remain in touch with each other in every moment. The friends are not able to devote equal quality time to everyone in the team as everyone is enrolled in his separate personal life and doesn't have enough time to spend with each other. Therefore the bonding between all the friends in the group is not equally strong. There are often times when other individuals join your group as he is your friend's mate but you dislike that person. But for your friends stake you also include him into the group. While that individual remains in the group you not like sharing your thoughts and experiences openly to all of your friends and remains restricted.
Besides having some dark side having large friend group offers some perks which are not experiences with having limited one or two friends. Often in groups every member has great memorable occasions in his life so as there are more members than more celebrations to celebrate. The large group of friends also adds diversity in the group. As every individual is different like some are shy, some are caring, while others are jovial and so on. This diversity of friends always adds fun and entertainment in the group. With diverse variety of friends, one can also receive variety of quality help and suggestions. For instance one of your friends may be very good in gadget technology, so he would be the advisor to the whole group. Whenever anyone wants to buy any gadgets they can take suggestions from him. Likewise problem solving in one life become easier with diverse variety of friends.
The perks and benefits which an individual gets after being part of large friend circle. I would always love to be part of large friends circle and spend time with all of them. This is because they not only brings more positive vibes in one’s life but also stands and support each other when needed.
- Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to 71
- "A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, the proposed new jazz club in Monroe, the C-Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popul 29
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould be the advisor to the whole group. Whenever anyone wants to buy any gadgets they ca...
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77389705882 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31263077695 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439338235294 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8221910386 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235103495703 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734576453574 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076481958873 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162421971121 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296237159446 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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