some people prefer to take knowledge of one subject, other prefer to take knowledge of many different subjects which would you prefer
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the advancement in society and development of technology, people are thriving to be successful in their lives. In this regard, getting knowledge is of paramount importance. It is even being said that difference between knowledgeable and illetrate is equal to the difference between life and death. There are different schools of thought amongst people to gain knowledge. Where some reckon to adept in one particular subject or field, others contemplate that wide array of knowledge about different subject is more important. As for this writer's opinion, I will be champion to the notion of having variety of knowledge. I will delve into most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reason coroborating my standpoint is associated with the notion that it helps people to be successful in their jobs.To be more specific, corporations and companies are looking for the employees who have experiences and education in multiple fields. To be a jack of all trades is the most appealing factor in getting a high salary job.It is worth mentioning that getting a high salary emploment improves the living standards of individuals. By the way of illustartion, TWo years ago, When I finished my graduation in pharmacy and went to a multinational comapny to apply for the job. My job resume only contained the professional degree credentials.MY interview was a success but I was not successful to get that job and, were told that I awas lacking the skills to get the job. On the other hand, the person who got selected was also pharmacist, but he also had master in business administration. If I had mutiple educational experience, I would have choosen for the job.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that learning about many different subjects enhance educational experiences. It is noticeable that knowledge is a power.People who gain information about variety of subjects feel confident in their life because of the provision of education. Not only they leave impression on others, but they can also help others in their studies. My brother experience on this matter is compelling example. He has master's degrees in many subjects. Last year, When i applied in MBA programme to improve my JOb resume. My brother came confidentally to assist me in my studies, saying that he already had learned the subjects in his masters Degree. It is crystal clear to see that knowldge about different subjects broaden person educational experiences.
BY perusing above paragraphs, one can infer that learning about multiple subjects is critically important. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating. First, it helps people in getting employment and progress. Second, it broaden their education horizon
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...ing employment and progress. Second, it broaden their education horizon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, as for, by and large, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15131578947 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02630863844 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5421180007 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.96 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.24 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163184428433 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474426132834 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059191912634 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108542171133 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684542003434 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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