Selecting the kind of work depends on personality and upbringing. Some people prefer to work for companies as a staff, and others prefer to have their own business. Indeed, each kind of this work has advantages and disadvantages, but content and outcoming are important.
First of all, taking a position in a company and working for that provides more opportunities to have time on weekends and after work; usually, people are no longer captive to work issues. However, obeying an employer is an inseparable part of that, and under no circumstance should you be disobedient. For instance, one of my friends disobeyed her boss and missed her work.
Meanwhile, the second point that I would like to say is that working for companies has specific and determined duties that perform it is enough hence usually, you are not responsible for important decisions, and it is safe. In contrast, working in your own business has more duties and commitments, and due to the higher risk of investment, making mistakes affects your business and might force you out of business. For example, my uncle worked for companies for a long time, and he had a satisfactory situation, but my father worked for himself, and by mistake, he missed all fortune that he gained.
Although there are numerous pros to having own business, and I take my hat off to anyone who can risk and implement important things, considering all points I mentioned, there are some more compelling advantages for me to work for companies. I believe that taking a position in the company is near to my attitude and personality.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past 70
- professioanal athletes such as football or basketball players should not be paid the high slaries thet they receive from their teams 66
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement it is better safe than sorry 70
- TOEFL ESSAY Many families have important traditions that family members share What is one of your family s important traditions 76
- Some people show their emotions while other people work hard to keep their emotions from showing What are the advantages of each type of behavior Which do you try to do 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92164179104 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86213975059 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8892776458 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320568120417 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125506353226 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857180550282 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199747423252 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330415928802 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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