In today's faced-paced and money-oriented the world, advertisements play a major role in our lives and our needs. A controversial question regarding this issue whether the advertisements lead to buy unnecessary things or otherwise. Some people believe that these advertisements that we see in the social networking and in streets encourage us to buy stuff which we do not need any more, whereas other disagree. I am of the opinion that; the advertisements cause to induce families to buy things that are not an integral part of their needs. In ensuing lines. I will address the most discernible reasons.
First and foremost, the most of companies exaggerate their own products. In fact, they are trying to exhibit goods very exciting, and encourage individuals to expend their money to buy. for instance, suppose a clothing company that produce every exciting and fascinating clothes especially for women. Therefore, the company advertise their products in TV and social networking pretending that this product is the best that you can find in all over the world. Each woman in average buy one clothe in a month, so, when they see this advertisement from TV or website in internet is induced to buy more than her needs. This experience demonstrates that the great aim of a company exaggerating and pretending to show their products very fascinating.
Equally important is that companies spend whole of their force to advertise their products. Indeed, they employ scientific, economist, and psychologist to take every suggestion from them to improve their products and creating new fascinating things. To illustrate this, I would like to mention a quote of a well-known person who has big company of electric marked throughout the world, he said “if I had 100 dollars to spend, I would use up 99 dollars to advertise the product and 1 dollar to invest on it". This experience taught me that advertisement is a significant thing for a company to sell their products.
last but not least, in today's state-of-the-art world everyone and also every company is looking for money, in the other word, money plays a pivotal role in orientation our lives. By the virtue of that, these companies do whole efforts to sell and show their products, i.e., they would utilize every things and every work. Take a personal experience as an example, once my friend and I decided to handle a small company concerning programming. In the beginning, we had no customers, so, we tried to advertise our company more than what it was, e.g., we were using words in our advertisements to kind of mislead and exciting individuals to suggest us to do their projects. As you can see, in today's modern the world for flourishing in a work must advertise in every way to attract people.
In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe companies advertise things more than what they are to attract people. Given the above, to advertise products the company not only exaggerate them more and pretending they are fascinating but also the company do the whole powers to sell their product to make money. That is why I believe that the advertisements encourage people to buy things that are unnecessary and this is a fact
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'inducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: inducing
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: Equally,
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Suggestion: companied
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2685.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9814471243 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93110306337 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47680890538 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5378170675 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4583333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235710151302 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726186606974 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705564329343 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155662848272 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694799020868 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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