THERE WERE ALWAYS BIG DEBATE ON WHAT CONCEPTS ARE BETTER TO GROW THE CHILDREN WITH IT, COOPERATIVE OR COMPETATIVE PERSONALITY. EVEN THOUGH SOME EXPERTS HAVE REACHES TO A BROAD CONSENSUS THAT THE PEOPLE WITH COOPERATIVE PERSONALITY ARE MORE SUCCESSFUL THAN OTHERS WHO ARE COMPETETIVE.I STRONGLY BELIVE THAT SOME STUDENTS THAT LEARN TO BE COMPETETIVE HAVE A BRIGHTER LIFE IN THE FUTURE. THIS ESSEY DEALS WITH SOME REASONS TO SUPPORT THIS POINT OF VIEW.
First of all, competitive humans are more motivated to achieve their desires in compare with cooperative people. They initiate to take all obstacles and reach to highest degree of success in their lives. For example one of my classmates in high school was a studious person and always did her best to gain what wanted. She believed that her scores must be higher than another student in the class. Her competitive attitude helped her to make a lot of improvement in her life and became top student in final exams and best scores achieved by her.
Secondly, competitive people have independent personality. Most of them try to find some solution for life problem that be unique. Moreover, most of the mentioned ways are blurred for others and cannot to imitate competitive people’s solutions because the creativity power will be increased when the sense of competition rise in our life.
Thirdly, most of the companies are looking for employ some people that are more competitive. For instance one of the most vital questions that should be replied by job seekers in Dell Company is related to evaluation of competitive power in humans. They must to explain why competitive people are more successful in their lives.
In conclusion, nowadays competitive people are more successful because they are more motivated, creative and independent in compare with cooperatives.
- Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative. Do others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why. 76
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 60
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “EVEN THOUGH” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...COOPERATIVE OR COMPETATIVE PERSONALITY. EVEN THOUGH SOME EXPERTS HAVE REACHES TO A BROAD CO...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a ARE'.
Suggestion: Who is a ARE
...ONALITY ARE MORE SUCCESSFUL THAN OTHERS WHO ARE COMPETETIVE.I STRONGLY BELIVE THAT SOME...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...CESSFUL THAN OTHERS WHO ARE COMPETETIVE.I STRONGLY BELIVE THAT SOME STUDENTS THAT...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...nitiate to take all obstacles and reach to highest degree of success in their lives. For e...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...on of competitive power in humans. They must to explain why competitive people are more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17171717172 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81762059507 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5402603587 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266753840101 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848171603666 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423040192975 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139195122787 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455244287102 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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