Personally, the most impressive news was reported about an author, named A.Thomas. her character was influenced on me by her independent and consistence.
Firstly, she has been written an internationally acclaimed story about the violence in the United States. For example the narrator of her story was a girl that should confronted with a disaster. In addition she should overcome every obstacles and threats to attested against United States’ police. A. Thomas remembered us that how successful people could enhance the quality of their lives by increasing their confidence.
Secondly, she had a special attention to the poor class of society and made examples from rags- to- reaches that initially leaved in slum and tackled their obstacles and solved financial pressure . Everyone that has been studies her stories ever, can attest that her tendency was appreciable and motivated them to improve the quality of their lives.
Thirdly, she is a black woman that has been faced with racism concepts in society. She pointed out that how everyone should fight with stupidly beliefs in the world. for instance “the hate you give” is her famous book that appreciated by New York times severally. The American police killed the young and black boy who lived in a terrible neighborhood and the legal trends of his judicial processes faced with injustice because he was African- American citizen.
In conclusion, the reports of details from A.Thomas life was affected me uniquely and learned me how to be a strong person.
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 60
- “What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response." 3
- Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative. Do others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thomas
...s was reported about an author, named A.Thomas. her character was influenced on me by ...
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Suggestion: Her
...ported about an author, named A.Thomas. her character was influenced on me by her i...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...t should confronted with a disaster. In addition she should overcome every obstacles and...
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Suggestion: .
... obstacles and solved financial pressure . Everyone that has been studies her stor...
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Suggestion: For
...ght with stupidly beliefs in the world. for instance 'the hate you give' ...
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Suggestion: Thomas
...nclusion, the reports of details from A.Thomas life was affected me uniquely and learn...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...learned me how to be a strong person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25203252033 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75504808619 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638211382114 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2514287298 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105688295159 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356978567754 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433931970126 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525197765421 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016115476721 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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