Some people say that computers have made the life easier and more convenient. Other say that computers had made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
Since the advent of computers they are continuously evolving and have now become a necessity. Still, there are many questions raised over the benefit of computers. personally I believe, PC's have made our life facile than ever before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
computers have made possible many jobs which before was either consider impossible or required array of force to complete a work. However, the discovery of the smart machine have been able to automate many tasks be it be producing a product in an industry, making copies of a document etc. These aforementioned jobs earlier demanded a laborious effort to carry out it but now such jobs are just few clicks away. My personal experience is a compelling evidence of this. Alexa, the voice assistant is a result of this computer world which is developed to make our lives easier by initiating many tasks with just a voice command. Like turning off a lamp, changing songs in the speaker, modifying the temperature of AC's etc. are just few examples which showcases the potential of the modern computers in making our lives easy to thrive and making us just focus on the essentials goals of the day and let the technology handle the minor tasks.
The discovery of the automation machine not only gave rise to its success but also paved the path for other modern need. The internet, which made its birth possible due to the coming of computers in the world has become the most demanding resource of today's era. For instance, when we have a computer and an internet connectivity we are able to make a channel between and the world which helps in keeping us abreast about the what is happening around the globe. Moreover, the real benefit of the web the e-shopping providing us with the opportunity to buy products right from our home with just the matter of few clicks. Therefore, making are lives easier to live and making us to stay at home and order our desired thing and not visiting markets for shopping.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that computers are able to drastically change our lives by taking the responsibility of many actions to be performed by them than by us. this is because they have automated a raft of tasks and which can now be started by simple commands, and because they have given us with the lot of services to be experienced with touch of hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74880382775 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58315716624 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538277511962 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6768507406 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.277777778 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130240916172 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043202731901 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464647736525 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871040848929 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291904748276 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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