Some people say that computers have made the life easier and more convenient. Other say that computers had made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
Personally speaking, I believe that computers are like a neuronal networks outside a skull. Nowadays, technology in general are extremely developed, helping us from medicine until have fun. The main responsible for such evolution it is a fact that computers are changing everything.
A big advantage that makes our lives easier is because today, we can communicate with people around the world without getting out of home. For instance, now I am english learner and I take classes with a native speaker that leaves so far from me, just by using a computer technology. Perhaps, thinking about 20 years ago we can even imagine that today we are able to do certain things. How am I living in Brazil would talk with a person in the USA?
Another positive view, is the possibility to learn everything that we want using computer. As I said before, we can learn a new language, also we can do it for entertainment, like to cook, to dance, to workout, to paint, to watch movies and TV shows etc. Literally, we can do whatever we want. For example, last days my brother was learning how to dance ballet by watching YouTube videos on the computer, his progress was incredible amazing.
In addiction the scientist’s life became easier. Years ago the scientific reports exists just of printed sheets. Then, it was extremely possible that distinct researchers had performing the same experiment by the time. But, today’s probability that certain situation happens is very less. Because, when a scientist got a result by his/her experiments, usually he/she publish them in an online magazine. Likewise, the entire scientific community can read the paper publish by him/her just looking at a magazine on the computer (in any place of the world). Now, duplicity of results it is almost impossible to exists, especially because this type of magazine just publish unpublished data.
For those reasons, I guess that each day the life has been easier to live by the possibility to use a computer in very different fields, and the trend is to improve more and more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, look, so, then, for example, for instance, i guess, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95389048991 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81363958218 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634005763689 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9767314634 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4736842105 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112406303837 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338937507037 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525962362443 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786494708044 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709035233954 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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