Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think that access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Why? Use specific reason and details to explain your idea.
Internet has become a mini world to the people. It has information even a minute valuable information about the world. In my view, internet is very useful to get valuable information in every aspect of the world as it is huge pond of information for the academically as well as the good basis for the personal communication.
Academic world is much dependent on the internet for their knowledge in their respective field. A lot of research in the past, journal, article, discovery, facts, cause, etc are found in the internet in the snipe of the finger. Its importance is mainly because of the delivery of the information what people even do not get after search for a colosial time alone. The information of reasearch regarding various sector from economices to science; politices to history can be gathered in easy way. Furthermore, it is helpful to the modern student for supporting in the assighnment, providing easy online class according to their desire time and providing as much as materials that they required to foundation for their research in the matter of time. For instance, Internet helped a lot during my project work as it saved my time as well as provided me a new and fresh materials regarding my project work's literature review. It helped in gathering the essential base knowledge to start the project. Apart from that, i had learned a lot about the statistical analysis from the internet class. To sum up, internet provided essential information in the academic field and various type of class that makes the education system very reliable and easy.
In addition, internet provides a previlege to get the lots of personal information. People are tring to communicate important people which are very far from them; being the linkage between people, transfer of the personal message becomes easier. People are contact with each other in the daily basis through skype, viber, fax, mail, facebook, etc. They can easily share their information with their desired one in a convenient and safe way. Different confidential communication between parties can happen with the help of internet. People can share their information even the location which is a way from them. Process of abroad college application to the transfer of money, all are facilitated with the presence of internet. So, internet decrease the gap of the people and change the communication process drastically in the world.
In conclusion, Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information which might be useful in a different way. Nothing in the world is flawless but, its benefical part is more discernible as compared to the harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause of the delivery of the information what people even do not get after search...
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Line 5, column 1016, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to start the project. Apart from that, i had learned a lot about the statistical...
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Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uable information which might be useful in a different way. Nothing in the world is flawless but, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08294930876 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83625859229 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6894302017 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262707460824 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083830010775 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680884445243 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180807675145 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569251047327 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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