Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problem. Which view do you agree with? Use specific Reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that the internet has a significant (instead of huge) impact on people’s everyday life. Meanwhile, there are so many disagreements on the internet’s pros and cons. Some people believe that it has a lot of helpful information, while others hold precisely the opposite view. I firmly believe that the internet can provide valuable knowledge for us, and its advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
First and foremost, the internet has a prominent role in pupils’ education and students’ intellectual abilities improvement. In the past, students had to attend libraries for their research, and most of the time, books were unavailable, due to reservation processes. So, with the advent of the internet, pupils could save more time, have access to up-to-date resources, cross-national boundaries, and be exposed to new ideas just by surfing the net. In this way, they can improve their warehouse of knowledge. One of my experiences could be taken as an example; I had a project in the review form of journal papers; most of the journals in the library were out-of-date, and second of all, there were no related journals available. Instead of wasting more time, I used the net, and just by reading articles’ abstracts, it was easy all of a (not all of the sudden) sudden to select appropriate papers. It is noteworthy to mention internet has opened up new avenues that previously were considered impossible.
Secondly, by spreading the internet internationally, communications have positively revolutionized. Generally speaking, internet technology allows people to meet and interact with one another electronically. One thing that was implausible in the past was video call, by internet development people started talking and seeing their beloved children and friends. For instance, my friend who just migrated to Canada can communicate with her family whenever she wants, and in this way, she feels less homesick. Furthermore, it should always be kept in mind that, the internet is not dividing people, and making the world smaller by bringing people together.
Lastly (instead of last but not least), one notable thing about internet that people should be aware of is the danger it can cause to their children. In other words, child predators can take advantage of kids’ lack of experience in protecting their identities. However, most of the parents are cautious about how to educate their children, but it is worthwhile to inform their children about these imposters, cyberbullies, and so on. According to a recent study, most of the children that were not under their parents’ observations were trapped by cyberbullies incidentally. Nevertheless, the danger is lying in different forms and paths; children are precious gifts for their parents, and it is obvious they are peculiar creatures that want to explore and dig different angles of this media, so parents must protect them.
In conclusion, there are many benefits and disadvantages to the internet that could not be put into words. People should be careful and pay attention to its ups and downs before using it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... smaller by bringing people together. last but not least, one notable thing ab...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, incidentally, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2582.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21616161616 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95309037812 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7246482413 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.260869565 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140841945878 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443709569598 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045184213317 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911184726883 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628710010801 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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