Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern technology, Internet has played a more and more important role in our daily life. people usually have a priority to search the information they need on the Internet when they are caught into troubles. Although some people may enjoy the convenience brought by the easy access to information online, I believe being exposed to much information can also cause some potential risk which people may not realize at all.
First and foremost, accessing to much information can lead to personal information being leaked even without rising any attention. Nowadays, since the computers are widely spread over the world, anyone with a laptop can found his own website for various of purposes. As you may notice, most of the websites require personal infomation to register a brand-new account, such as cellphone number, e-mail address, identity card number and so on. The majority of people tend to enter in all the reqiured information without doing any evaluation on the reliability of the website, probably because they cannot wait to use the functions provided by it. As a result, people's personal information are highy likely to be leaked out by the founder of the webiste for illegal purpose. In fact, some websites do utilize uses' personal infomation to earn tremenous profit. In other situations, even though the website will not release clients' information, chances are that sophisticated hackers will steal these informations away since most of the websites have no measures for data protection. After personal information being leaked, people will receive tons of harassing phonecalls and messages, which really drives one mad.
Moreover, sometimes people can possibly be mislead or even cheated by all kinds of informations since there are so much fake informations online. On one hand, in order to attract more readers, it is typical for self-media to fabricate fake news. Such kind of news are very appealing to readers because they always report on some explosive news catch readers' eyes. However, they statement and detailed information may be totally false. People, especially children will be misled by the fake news if they cannot tell right from wrong. On the other hand, small businesses also use exaggerated descriptions to attract more customers. People are always cheated by fake products promoted on the advertisement. For example, there are lots of fake health care medicines in China. The compoments of these fake medicines do no help for the elder's health, even in the contrary, cause harmful side-effects. Till now, fake medicines are still a big problem waiting to be regulated by the government.
To be honest, accessing to information does have its advantages. It helps people solve problems quickly and make life much easier and convenient. Nevertheless, I still have to point out that being exposed to too much information can lead to troubles beyond your realization beacuse personal information can be easily leaked and people may be misled by all kinds of fake informations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... more important role in our daily life. people usually have a priority to search the i...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...rmation online, I believe being exposed to much information can also cause some po...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t all. First and foremost, accessing to much information can lead to personal i...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
... one mad. Moreover, sometimes people can possibly be mislead or even cheated by all kinds...
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Line 5, column 831, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elders'' or 'elder's'?
Suggestion: elders'; elder's
...these fake medicines do no help for the elders health, even in the contrary, cause har...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2555.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2356557377 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80006451604 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4368108183 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.458333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222499334158 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636063105584 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446186669574 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151040309451 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052347306508 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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