Some people say that money is the solution to most of the world's problems. Others say that it is the cause of them. Who do you agree with? Use examples and details to support your answer.
Money is one of the basic pillars of our society. Everything in life have a cost, which can be acquired in exchange of money. However, ethical problems can not be solved by means of money. It is my firm belief that money is not the solution to most of the world’s problems. Even though, this financial aids could fulfil some of the current problems, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, some of the current problems may not be solved through money. Nowadays, there is a big gap between non-developed and developed countries. It is certainly clear to see what problems affect each country. Poor countries need more money to solve their problems than rich countries. Nevertheless, not all the problems which affect to the world are equal. In fact, money only can solve material problems, and ethical problems related with society may not be solved. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience living in a developed country, like Spain.
Secondly, if money is created there will be an inflation process. Therefore, it will translate into a devaluation of money. Moreover, the life cost will increase in all the fields. An other important issue is that currency is not the same in all the countries, and its has a different value. For instance, difference between dollar in United States and euro in European Union. Consequently, poor countries currency has less value than rich countries. For this reason, when people of rich countries travel into an underdeveloped country, it is said that everything is cheaper there.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that money is not the solution of most of the world’s problems, due to there is a large gap between some countries in which we have to work together in order to reduce it.
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- Some people say that money is the solution to most of the world s problems Others say that it is the cause of them Who do you agree with Use examples and details to support your answer 60
- Some people say that money is the solution to most of the world s problems Others say that it is the cause of them Who do you agree with Use examples and details to support your answer 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87025316456 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7095760176 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4975601692 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.95 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157029291054 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513525089376 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484522302769 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102637678342 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348153238865 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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