Some people say that students should study many lessons during a semester, but others say that it is better for students to just take three or four lessons. Which do you think is better?
I think it’s better for students to take only three or four lessons. why is that? Because they can concentrate on those subjects and get higher grades.
when you have a lot of lessons sometimes you can go all day at school and then there is less time for you to study and you have a lot more to study for.
so i think it’s important to cut to three or four lessons a semester only so you have more time and your mind will concentrate in those three or four subjects.
And even when the tests comes you’ll have your mind focused on 3 or 4 subjects and you’ll do much better on those tests.
one more reason why I think it’s better to have three or fours lessons in one semester is that you wont be as stressed as if you had more
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 612.0 1977.66487455 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 407.700716846 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22068965517 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30445982332 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 212.727598566 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 618.680645161 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6111837271 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27419114785 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140405735959 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130438899071 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164189832135 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504617728085 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 86.8835125448 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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