Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Considering staying in one place or moving in search of another place, I am strongly inclined to the the side of moving in search of another place. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, I believe that the desirable situations are not embed in favorite places. Besides, I highly believe that there is causal relationship between the humans effort one the one hand and their prosperous on the other hand. It goes without saying, if people interest in the better position, in addition to upgrade their ability via learning different skills, they categorically should explore the surrounding area for ideal situations. For instance, if I desire to gain more money in my future job, I should graduate from the best university even in the far distance from my country. Similarity if I do not find a cost effective house for living, I will move to other neighborhoods offering the suitable one. It is also worth nothing that in some cases, there is a remarkable obligation for moving. For example, the migration from the crowded and polluted area to the safer one particularly for adult people can be attributed as a best example for this case. As far as I am concerned, neither job conditions nor traveling expense cannot justify or neglect this subject when it comes to the health care.
Aside from the point I made above, being one of the most proliferated anthropology subject in all societies, the intrinsic nature of humans is described as creatures tend to change themselves or the surrounding area in order to achieve the better conditions. As the prehistoric literature reveals, the termination of some sources persuade people people to search other areas. For example, the Spanish people migrated to the America and Africa for some exploitation policies. As a result, the foundation of moving originate in the necessity to acquire the life sources.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the interesting experiences in moving for seeking the better opportunities. Needless to say, in any types of moving, the introduction with different element of cultures such as languages, customs, religious, etc will be provided.
To recapitulate, I cannot agree more about the necessity of moving in search of another place for seeking the desirable conditions regarding the tendency of human to acquire the prosperous and interesting experience in moving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16120906801 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93600787648 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536523929471 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9300961573 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.529411765 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31536156465 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912072990579 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919733549937 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173939938873 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822747802366 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.