Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life.Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When It comes to the issue if modern life has improved life by using cars. People give surely different answer to this question, and many of them have a certain reason for their selection. In my opinion, the automobile has an important role in our society due to the fact It makes easier our life in several aspects.
First of all, automobiles have a vast number of advantages for improving our life. A person who uses such invent can go anyplace because It enhanced the way of transportation, and It will transport more than one person by time.My own experience is a compelling example of this, I can not imagine a life without a car because It has an overriding role in my life. In order to arrive early university and attending my dates on time.However, there are people who make infractions while drive as answers a call or do not respect transit rule then They are fined or in the worst of the case taken behind bars. Like several invents It has pros cons, so the important is to take advantage of this.I can get extra points for being on time in every class at university, my study center has several values and one of then is punctuality.As a result of being punctual, I won a price for respect university’s values.For this reason, I strongly believe that It is worthwhile to drive a car because You can get a better style life.
Secondly, an industrial revolution happened when the first car was created, and also there was a high job offer so It brought several economic benefits to the world.For producing an automobile is necessary some specific skills in every employed, so each one has to be prepared and get the necessary knowledge for being hired.For instance, my father was graduated from UNI, such university is one of most demanding in my country.He applied for a job in a transnational company called Suzuki because the lack of experience made that he was refused.However, my father continued to prepare to take post-graduate studies then He got a job in a small car company and gained the necessary experience then He applied again for a job at Suzuki.As a result of his perseverance, he got the job, and now He is in charge of the engineering area.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that It is better to use cars. This is because constantly societies are growing up, and their needs change so this sort of invent bring us several economic benefits and encourage our society keep growing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68075117371 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87016543652 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.650978089 48.9658058833 457% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.4 100.406767564 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.6 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6 5.45110844103 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11279362899 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668908276974 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517496002883 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829597337893 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733100616649 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 11.7677419355 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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