Many people might think the person who success is the person who graduated from university. This is because the university provides the information and knowledge for students. Not only do they present school's theory, but they also make a lot of practices for students. However, in my opinion, the word success is not for the person who graduated from collage only. Everyone be able to be successful person even they do not have a degree for two reasons: Some people use life experience to teach themselves and another can find the knowledge from the internet.
First, many people learn many things from their real life. They have tried something new that they want to study. For example, the person who created Facebook. He did not have done with university, yet he quitted out from school and make their business. So he is the one person who success without studying in university. Leaning from the university is not the answer for everyone. Although, professor might give a lot of cases study, it is not the same as people face in real life.
In addition, nowadays, people can also search the information from the internet, which provides the useful knowledge for anyone. Moreover, the internet be able to access everywhere in the world, it is very easy to look for some information that they would like to know. Should professor give case study for student, the people who are not students can also look for case study on the internet. It has more than the cases that professor given the students.
Finally, to be successful I do not think people need to get into university or graduate from the college. Not only can they learn life experience from their real life, but they also learn somethings new from the internet, which is everyone uses in daily life. Furthermore, people should not judge others from the education, they have to look at the others pasts of their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...o graduated from collage only. Everyone be able to be successful person even they ...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ases that professor given the students. Finally, to be successful I do not think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80923076923 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45773552388 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3078827641 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2631578947 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136637278577 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052431719514 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624129123099 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939535759748 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348454002266 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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