Some people think that to be successful, you need to get in university education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable that university education is an indispensable need in every developed community. Despite some people believe that university education is crucial to secure a successful career, others refuse to link tertiary education to success. This essay will discuss both points of view. I, however, opine that the high academic qualifications gained from attending university would help achieve success in the future.
On the one hand, university graduates obtain not only academic experience but also better social skills. University studies are characterized by being more specific and ...
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...mployees. Thus, many people around us On the other hand, those who are against...
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...andatory to excel in your profession. To conclude, some persons argue that att...
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...rgue that attending the university is a must to have a successful life; nevertheless, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53352769679 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00127612419 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7112790606 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139161694839 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452607557736 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331414806086 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910137268324 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034732634357 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.