Some people think it is the best approach for students to learn if schools start the day at an early time in the morning. But some think the school should start the day at a late time. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and detailed examples to support your answer.
it goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world in which we live, working and jobs are essential part of one's life; in fact, so important are jobs that people use a plethora of methods to improve the result of their works. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion about the better method of working. Some people are the leading proponents of the claim that working quickly and risky is the best is of paramount importance. However, I firmly believe that the best way to work is working slowly and meticulously in order to make sure that everything is correct. The rationale behind this idea will be elaborated upon and exemplified in the ensuing paragraphs by focusing on 2 fundamental reasons.
The first reason which juts of mind is that nowadays by making the first mistake, one can lose his or her job. nowadays, there is a long array of people seeking jobs owing to population growth. should one make his or her very first mistake, s/he has to expect losing their job. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics revealed by University of Tehran, illustrates that over 50 percent of people who were fired last year, made less than 3 mistakes in their job and their few mistakes are responsible for their job loss. this vividly shows that in today's world bosses expect their employers to make no mistakes in their jobs.
In approaching this issue, apart from the point I mentioned above, another equally important reason that should be scrutinized is that one can earn people's trust by working precisely. people don't trust someone who makes lot of mistakes in his job. it is more important for people to trust in someone who works well and meticulously. An example can shed light on this claim; take two carpenters for instance and let us assume that one of them provides the orders quickly but with lot of problems and the other one's job takes more time but no mistake is seen is his products. it is decisively evident that the second carpenter attracts many people's trust and be more successful in future.
In summary, taking the aforementioned ideas into consideration, one can safely draw the conclusion that working slowly but precisely is the most important method by which one can work. this conclusion is drawn owing to not only the warrant precise job grants to one but also the trust people have in one's job. but that was a story in a nutshell; as a matter of fact, there are a myriad of reasons and examples supporting this idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in fact, in summary, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78372093023 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62783391543 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527906976744 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2749258902 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.277777778 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116593620048 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040500280268 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028782169839 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748674519966 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209280351915 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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