Playing sport is undoubtfully useful for people. It is often claimed by some that it is more profitable when a person participates in team sports, such as basketball and football, whereas others hold the opinion that individual sports, namely swimming, is beneficial. This essay will discuss both previously mentioned notions and from my point of view, I believe that playing in a team is advantageous.
Taking part in a single sport is indeed helpful for people for some reason. To commence with, it can help people to understand themselves as they face and attempt to solve their problems with their own hands. For example, most of the individuals who trained in wrestling and swimming often gained self-confidence and became more mature. Moreover, personal sports may be non-depressing. In other words, because they do not rely on others, they do not feel any pressure themselves as well as blame themselves.
However, team games have also advantages. Firstly, it will teach people communication skills which are essential for their future life when they are employed in companies. When residents play basketball or football, for example, they would learn human behaviours, respecting others, how to listening to each member and understanding them. In this way, they can expand their knowledge about humans and can be successful in their workplace. Another benefit of it is that it allows the person to solve problems in the team. They will acknowledge solving issues in public is more profitable rather than tackling them alone as many ideas are collected in order to reach the right decision.
In conclusion, although independent games help one to be confident and feel non-pressure, participating in team games also have merits, such as they help to learn communication skill and to solve problems in public. As far as I am concerned, I believe that playing team sports is more advantageous than taking part in a single game for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15772870662 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91923069841 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2667437287 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202464317662 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704023925213 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661691021453 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131764311155 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509941154121 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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