In the contemporary world, sports which is an outstanding phenomenon are highly concerned by many people. While several people argue that playing sports in teams brings enormous benefits, others claim that it is more efficient to participate in individual sports.
On the one hand, team sports require cooperation between team players with the purpose of achieving a shared goal or gaining popularity for the team, hence teamwork skills which are entirely crucial for almost all players are undoubtedly fostered. Furthermore, team members who are trained together by a personal coach or trainer can understand their peer's strengths and weaknesses clearly, so they can support and alter each other in cases of any injuries that happened during the match. For instance, Vietnamese football teams which are under the supervision of the Korean trainer - Park Hangseo - have encountered many setbacks together, and due to the brilliant combination, they became the champion in the AFF Cup 2020.
On the other hand, it is indisputable that individual sports lessen conflicts between team members because people involve in competition with their own strategies and aims, which are not contradicted to any benefits of others. Additionally, when players are competing, it will be more facilitated for them to change the strategies to win without any dependence on team members, all of that could help people develop their decision-making and problem-solving skills to assert themselves between a number of opponents.
In conclusion, both team sports and individual sports are being highly appreciated in modern society, and people have the right to choose which types of sports they are willing to play based on their competence and personal preference.
- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or negative development Give your reasons and examples 70
- Today family members do not eat meals together Why does this happen Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 61
- The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 88
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped Discuss both the use views and give your opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44280442804 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92793852418 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1819850135 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.375 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23312475558 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112041874257 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745016944316 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165012175626 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569632531225 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 11.7677419355 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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