Every city have their own unique cultural values which represents the city. people have different views some believes that huge tall buildings are more impressive and attract the peoples some may have believes that health and education is important factor which needs more money to spend on it. In my prospective spending more money on education and health is more significant than large buildings. my propensity is for following reasons which are as follows.
to begin with, the very first reason i advocate this point that education and health needs more money is with out education and health we cant progress in any field of life, if people of community is more healthy and educated which will more beneficial to whole community, also for other people of the country to attract them to live their because of better health system and educated society, for example we can notice people move to other country because their education and health system. Although some buildings may attract some people but majority of people choose the place to live where their children,s can get quality education and health care.
secondly,now a days world economy is going worst , the health care cast is more expensive of ordinary people even wealthy people can,t afford the hospital expenses for some disease like cancer, and also unemployment rate is very high, poor families cant sent their kids to school. Spending money wisely can help the people who cant approach the basic needs of life if people are healthy and educated they will contribute in country or city economy.
To sum it up, impressive building can attract few people while spend more money on education and health ,will attract more people ti live in city also which contributes in helping the poor people those have basic health and education which helps in country economy as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00651465798 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33452847297 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504885993485 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.013116612 48.9658058833 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.777777778 100.406767564 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166702466984 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867818248269 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534327792664 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119210626119 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361953168833 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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