Humans are different from animals and one reason that distinguishes us from animals is sociability. People can choose to stay with each other or stay alone. I think that living in society with other people and meeting them is very important to have a good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. When we communicate more, we can solve problems easier, and get familiar with each other better. When people are away from each other they can't show their emotions, so relations gets worse. I explain each reasons in next paragraphs.
First of all, when two people are close to each other they can solve problems easier, for example, last year I saw that my close is not answering my phone, I thought that he's not willing to continue his friendship with me, so I didn't call him again, one day I saw him at university and I asked him about it, he explained that his phone's display was broken, and he apologized me. Now we are friend again. If I couldn't see him, I wouldn't ask him about the problem.
Second is getting familiar with each other. When people meet each other they talk more, share different ideas, negotiate about them and finally know the feelings and mindset background of each other so they get closer to each other's ideas. Imagine that you see a new friend, how could you know him more, without visiting or communicating with him? Therefore I think it's essential to stay in touch to improve relations.
And the third reason is sharing emotions. People who are close should remember how they feel about each other. There are different ways of showing emotions, for example, they can throw a birthday party or buy a gift or invite each other out for lunch. By showing emotions they can understand each other more and can attach emotionally together.
As I said, being sociable is an important thing in human life. We should show our emotions and talk about them, to improve our relationship with other people. Nowadays , it's harder to meet our friends frequently, But we should keep in touch with them to have a better relations and better life close to them.
- Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization which one of the following would you choose and why An organization that provides food and housing to people i 87
- Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate wi 61
- Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate wi 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i think, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73829201102 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44782532272 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3632554511 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5263157895 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402200049618 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134170866306 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963892094481 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229028214944 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130039850289 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.