Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer?
Traveling is an ineffable way to amuse, work and know new people and cultures. It is always an enhancement experience for every age people who sake any of these approaches. I personally believe that traveling is a pivotal factor that increase knowledge and overall word’s vision in every traveler. I prefer to travel with somebody, a friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, travelling with another person is cheaper. This is because when we travel with someone else we can share the costs of the travel such as a meal in a restaurant or the taxi bill. Moreover, a room for two people is more affordable than a single room. My own experience demonstrates this concept, last year I made two trips for the same place. One time I was alone and the other I went with a friend. I realize that the cost of the travel was much more affordable when I went with a companion.
Secondly, in same aspects travelling alone is not safe. There are many situations that are more advantageous and safer to be with a company. For example, if we get sick alone who will help us or send notices to our relatives? Or when we are completely full of bags and requiring to go to the bathroom, who will help us to deal with this? I think that is always safer and more comfortable to be with someone when we are travelling.
Finally, it is more amusing to travel with friends and relatives on vacation, for instance. Having a lot of people around to go out and explore all the new incredible places and experiences is much more exciting for me. For example, when I went to an aquatic park alone it was so boring because I went in all toys with people that I did not know.
To sum up, I strongly prefer to travel with a companion. This is because it is cheaper, safer and much more amusing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this way for the following reasons...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...e completely full of bags and requiring to go to the bathroom, who will help us to de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49101796407 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61168472981 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0336986311 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4285714286 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278502767429 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940396949978 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875222972399 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174267033011 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661319431646 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.