Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your choice.
Commuting from one place to another has become a part of everyone's life. People travel from their source to their destination by various means like car, train, bus , and aeroplane. Duration of travel varies from short journeys to office to long trips to a another country for a holiday. Some people prefer to travel in a solitude, undisturbed environment. I, on the other hand, prefer to travel with a companion.
Travelling alone makes my journey monotonous and boring. Company of a friend or a relative gives me an opportunity to chat with him, discuss various issues and problems pertaining to ...
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Sentence: Duration of travel varies from short journeys to office to long trips to a another country for a holiday.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to a and another
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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