Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong.
It is argued that the first impressions are reliable because people show their reality in the first visit. On the other hand, some people argue that first impressions are not credible. As far as I am concerned, the first impressions are not important to me when I want to choose a person as a roommate, partner, or co-worker.
To begin with, all people have limitation and they cannot recognize each other for the first time. There are many types of people in this world. Some people are very straight with others and some are not. I don't think that we can judge any person's character in the first meeting. When we meet someone first time, it is for sure that he or she will try to behave properly and finely. Not only he or she but we also try to behave properly with them when we meet them for the first time. To understand that a person is reliable needs more assessments. After 25 years of living with my friends, I do not know many of their characteristics.
Moreover, somebody's mood can lead to a behavior that does not represent him. There are people who suffer from depression, loneliness or people who had unusual experiences beforehand. Some are emotional and they cannot dissimulate their emotions, and therefore this can conduct to misjudgments. For example, sometimes we encounter some difficulties in our life that we need to be supported by our friends. There were many times that a friend I taught he was not supportive, has helped me in difficulties.
On the other hand, some people hold this view that the first impressions are reliable. They argue that before people first meet, they have no idea about the behavior and characteristics of other people, so in the first meet, they have no inclination to impress each other.
In conclusion, I believe that judging someone from his/first impression is not reliable. Knowing the real characteristics of someone needs spending time and evaluating his/her in both happy and tough times. The outward appearance cannot reveal the reality of someone. Though the behavior of people in the first meet may not be intentional, I prefer not to judge people in our first meeting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...traight with others and some are not. I dont think that we can judge any persons cha...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...not. I dont think that we can judge any persons character in the first meeting. When we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79945799458 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75114070886 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7560327934 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370627104844 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110887501842 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919768733561 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21734195402 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865349145931 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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