some students prefer to live on campus in a dormitory. others prefer to live in an apartment or house off campus. which do you prefer? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When someone is accepted for university there is an important problem and that is where the student should live. Almost there are two choices, living in an apartment or in dormitory. Both of them have specifics, positive and negative aspects. In my view, I would prefer to live in dormitory due to several reasons and I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.
Living in dormitory means to have one or more roommate and share the facilities of the room with others. This condition causes to match yourself with others and it is a lesson for learning to be in society and to live with others. For example I lived in dormitory for four years and before living there I was so selfish and I think that others should always listen to me but I’ve figured out that in some manners even if the right is with me I have to control myself and don’t say anything. It is a really wonderful help and good taught for learning to live in society and handle the problems and situations.
Being in dormitory causes making new relationships and new friends and that is due to a lot of people are living around each other. Finding someone with the personalities that are your favors for choosing as a friend is so easy because the variety of people is a lot. I’ve made one of my best friendships in dormitory. My friend has special behaviors that are my ideals and I can really fit my reaction with her personality and for her it’s like me.
Living with different people means living with different cultures. In my opinion it is like an experience of being tourist because you can know more about cultures, foods, ancient places and more details of countries without spending even $1 money. I had a friend who is from India and she explained to me every interesting things about her country and I really fall in love in India and I have to go there especially for their dresses.
In conclusion, being in dormitory and living them is like another world or an enjoyable journey although there are some negative aspects about it but the positive ones domain to negative ones.
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...before living there I was so selfish and I think that others should always listen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65425531915 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56415531614 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497340425532 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6222962826 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199140749146 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709145235871 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596130751146 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116103513756 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767825264418 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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