some people think that teachers and education professionals should make all of the important decisions about what subjects are taught in schools. other thinks that business and industry professionals should make all the major decisions. which view do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The subjects that are taught in schools, make the basics information about future studying of students. We should pay more attention to them because they guarantee the future life of next generation. Teacher and education professionals may say their own opinions or consider their personal favors but business and industry professionals are the best choice for deciding that which subjects should be taught.
Having job is the most important reason for studying and being successful. When business and industry professionals choose the subjects in schools they think about that which majors in future have a good job chance and the opportunity for finding job is more in which majors. This will guarantee the future.
Job security is another reason for deciding about which subjects that should be taught. Job security is more important than finding a job because when someone finds a job, he/she should be sure that they have the job for a long time or a regular time and base on this they can plan for future. When there is any job security, mind will be busy and no one can be sure that tomorrow do I have my job or I should find and search for another job. The professionals consider this important issue and try to plan that this problem doesn’t happen.
Earn enough or more money is the result of finding good job. When business and industry professionals want to choose the subjects in school they think about the society and base on this they decide which subjects are more important and the students can find job easily and then earn the money that they need for continuing their life. They have the knowledge that the industry and business world what kind of jobs need.
In conclusion, while business and industry professionals want to decide about majors they will consider all the important things that will change and make life of students and they are professional and know the needs of society. Their decisions are based of knowledge and not their personal favors.
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...at this problem doesn't happen. Earn enough or more money is the result ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91420118343 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51649263825 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417159763314 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.745993212 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26899031851 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102540227575 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833989276909 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181807268745 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632139781247 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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