Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use especific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. For a young adult, I would say that is better to stay at their parents home for a longer time. They can choose some reasons to explain the idea to stay as much as possible at their families’ home. As examples, young adults can have their financial support for a longer time staying at their families’ home, they can have their families’ advices every day, and they can share any small problem with people who love them .
As a first point of view, it is not always easy when young people start to pay their bills. Sometimes, they need their parent’s help because it is difficult to find a good job with a great salary in the beginning of their professional lifes. For young adults, excluding the payment of a rent can be a good way to save money for them.
Another important situation refers to some doubts that all young adults have in their lifes. Staying at their parent’s home for a longer time, they have a great chance to get all good advices from their families. While they are in front of a new challenge, having someone that they can really trust is the best situation.
Additionally, young adults usually have some small problems that they think are the worst situation in their lifes. Normally, due to an abscense of experience young adults make a small problem into a huge problem. But, when they still are at their families’ home they have the chance to share every problem with someone who has more experience and loves them. Absolutely, this is a real good experience.
To sum up, young adults should choose to stay at their families’ home as much as possible. This place is the best environment to get some help, to receive the best advices, and to share any kind of problem that they may have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... small problem with people who love them . As a first point of view, it is not a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, still, while, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63173652695 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38621197174 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458083832335 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4446745828 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4008723054 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177234567481 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14631255757 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23373793407 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12875954732 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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