Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do you think is better

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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?

Opinions vary with the regard to the question of whether young should consider independence from their relatives in the young age. Although living with adults promote the feeling of so called “comfort zone”, I dare say that living with their families may detrimentally affect the character of the young.

Undoubtedly, the less responsibility a person takes on his own shoulder the less risk of failure she feels. Thus, the life with parents is conjugated with the reduced level of stress and low responsibility, making the life of young much easier. Moreover, some families promote a life like ...

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