Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Others want to stay with their families for a longer time. Which of these two you prefer and why?
Family do play a crucial role in an individual's life because he learns all the basic traits like speaking, listening, language, morals, norms, values, culture and everything of his life from his family members. That is the reason a famous philosopher Rousseau once said that in an ideal situation, family play the role of the teacher and vice-versa. As far as staying with family is concerned, this is a controversial topic and people of different ideologies have varied views on it, but I personally feel a young adult should make the efforts to stay with his family as long as he can because of se...
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Sentence: That is the reason a famous philosopher Rousseau once said that in an ideal situation, family play the role of the teacher and vice-versa.
Description: The fragment family play the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense
man is social being
man is a social being
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