Students are more influenced by their teachers than their friends.
Schools are essential part of the society. Where students not only get education but also learn various experience of life. Teachers plays vital role in the society, People look at them with admiration because they are responsible for molding future generations in the right direction. However, I believe that students get influenced by the friends rather than teachers. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, students spend their most of the time with their friends. So, they get more information from their friends and they always try to copy them. Such as, dressing sense, habits, hobbies, and many more. Students get comfortable environment with their peers, so they share their experiences and situation to their friends. Friends can understand student’s problems better because they are in the same boat. Whereas, teachers and students relationship have generation gap, in that case students do not get comfort zone to open up with their teachers.
Secondly, students can do competition with their friends which can bring positive results. The sense of competition encourages them to do better in their lives. Another reason is that social medial play important role in being in touch with. Students do not just spend time with their friends at school. They also arrange get together for the assignment, project work or only for social gathering.
Lastly, human nature is that they get attracted to the negative thing first compare to the positive. Same thing happens with the students, teachers are to give them education they cannot be their friends. Teachers teach them discipline, hard work, morals etc. Which will give students right direction in their life. Whereas, students can do whatever they want to do when they are surrounded by their friends. Such as, doing some adventure activity which even dangerous to their life.
Let’s put in a nutshell, Students get influence by the friends because of the similarity in the age and understanding and even they spend more time with their friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...students right direction in their life. Whereas, students can do whatever they want to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24085365854 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6182315504 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0964678096 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7391304348 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433648922715 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13507984218 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117618549872 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260576437614 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10877935491 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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