Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.1. Automobiles 2. Bicycles 3. Airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's advanced technology made people's life much comfortable and luxurious. There is no doubt that people will continue to put their efforts to improve technology further. One of the best examples of such technology is an innovative transportation such as Cars, Bicycle, Airplanes, Ships and many more. We can see the benefits of these transportation in our life. In my opinion, automobile industry has rapidly developed, and it has changed people’s life tremendously.
First, automobiles provide convenience to people for travel. Nowadays, in the family mostly all adults have a car. People can go to their desire place at their convenience. If the family wants to go for any trip, they do not have to worry about losing train or flight. Automobiles have comfort features to attract people such as air-conditioning, back camera and heated seats. So, people will not get tired of driving their car for a long drive.
Secondly, we use automobiles not only for regular transportation, but also for extra important issues. For example, if we want to send a patient to the hospital, we cannot be successful without an ambulance. Firemen use their specific cars to rescue who are surrounded in fire. Therefore, automobiles are very necessary for saving people. Also, automobiles are getting used for businesses. Compare to the other transportation, automobiles provide many numbers of people job. Various businesses are connected to automobiles such as luggage, goods and raw materials. Even people use cabs to commute to another place that is one of the business.
Let’s put in a nutshell, automobile have changed people’s life a lot because it helps people to save time and get joy in life. It is even used by people in their daily routine compared to other transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'these transportations'?
Suggestion: this transportation; these transportations
...d many more. We can see the benefits of these transportation in our life. In my opinion, automobile ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2214532872 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.115620585 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.040593033 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8571428571 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165231267397 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525198438015 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405651329955 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11181702799 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324458640966 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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