Students have many hard school works which should be finished in correctly and in perfect time. Whether, students will learn more if they work on their assignment together, or if they asked to work alone. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some kids prefer to do their work alone, especially, they do not like to be with free ride people, who depend on other into finish their work. Ride students share with their team in prepare material for the assignment. However, In my perspective, I concur with this statement. Young people get more benefits from working in team. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, working as a group will facilitate finish of work. This is mainly due to the fact that, each member of team responsible to do part of assignment. Therefore, work will finished in short time. This is example from my real life, when I was students, in our country we did not have group work style. Everyone asked to do his own project or assignment. This made me spent a long time to finish my work. Instead, my son studied in United State. The schools here adapt this design of work. Consequently, my son did his work with his group, and they finished in short time without diffiiculties or tiredness. As we can see the beneficial from working as a group in finishing the work in ideal time.
Moreover, other reason springs to my mind is, students can widen their scope when working as a team in there assignment. kids can exchange knowledge and information between them. This will help in broaden their horizon and increase their skills base. As we now everyone has specific weakness which differ from other weakness. In this case, students will help each other to understand any struggling point. This will help kids to make a net work and bound their relationship.
In conclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions that mentioned above. working as a team will lead to finish the work easily and in short time. In addition, this will help to build a strong bound between friends and exchange the information and skills between them.
Students have many hard school works which should be finished in correctly and in perfect time. Whether, students will learn more if they work on their assignment together, or if they asked to work alone. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some kids prefer to do their work alone, especially, they do not like to be with free ride people, who depend on other into finish their work. Ride students share with their team in prepare material for the assignment. However, In my perspective, I concur with this statement. Young people get more benefits from working in team. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, working as a group will facilitate finish of work. This is mainly due to the fact that, each member of team responsible to do part of assignment. Therefore, work will finished in short time. This is example from my real life, when I was students, in our country we did not have group work style. Everyone asked to do his own project or assignment. This made me spent a long time to finish my work. Instead, my son studied in United State. The schools here adapt this design of work. Consequently, my son did his work with his group, and they finished in short time without dificulties or tiredness. As we can see the beneficial from working as a group in finishing the work in ideal time.
Moreover, other reason springs to my mind is, students can widen their scope when working as a team in there assignment. kids can exchange knowledge and information between them. This will help in broaden their horizon and increase their skills base. As we now everyone has specific weakness which differ from other weakness. In this case, students will help each other to understand any struggling point. This will help kids to make a net work and bound their relationship.
In conclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions that mentioned above. working as a team will lead to finish the work easily and in short time. In addition, this will help to build a strong bound between friends and exchange the information and skills between them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71503957784 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53612931059 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493403693931 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9350962659 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.8214285714 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5357142857 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67857142857 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502263710155 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144813032963 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138904984161 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307002087993 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164842352739 0.0645574589148 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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