Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to lice in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reason for your preference?
A student who is educating in a university, is around 18-23 years old. These teenagers have some choices to live in when they join a univesity. However, sometimes, they have difficulties to prefer whether they live in dormitories or apartments.From my point of view, i absolutalty believe that instead of living in dormitories, living in apartments has more advantages. There are a lot of reasons to prefer apartments such as a freedom life in apartments, roommate problems and small dormitories.
First of all, as i mentioned before, students having education in universities are aroun 18-23 years old. That means they are on their most enjoyable times. Since dormitories have a lot of boring rules, these teenagers would’t prefer to live in a rule based area. Meanwhile, when they live in their own apartment, they have the freedom of entering to home whatever the time is and sleeping when they would like to sleep. Therefore if the choice of the students is living at apartments then they don’t only have freedom to live in apartments as they want, but they don’t have to follow the rules of a dormitory as well.
The second point i would like to mention is roommate problems. It is well established that students generally don’t choose their roommates. This conditions requires flexibility to get used to every person. However, when they can not have a smooth communication with the roommates then serious problems are existed. For preventing that, they have again freedom to choose their homemates and even freedom of living alone. Therefore students living alone can invite whoever they want.
Finally, the living area may be significant for the occupants. As it is a small area that dormitories have, students have difficulties to live in small dormitories. Cooking can be the most important problem because of the smell they produce. On the other hand, i infer from that, apartments are appropriate living areas for the students who want grand areas for living.
In conclusion, as a person who had serious problems with old doormates and dormitories, i strongly suggest to live in apartments because of the facts that more free life, problematic roommates and great living area in apartments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14835164835 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92057130486 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4784769791 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384498805104 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117136888083 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775751614779 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222027690715 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553528626771 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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