For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Many people believe for success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school while. Each options have their negetive and positive points. In my point of view, studying hard in school is more important for success in a future job because not only do you learn skills, but also made you prepare for your future career.
The first aspect to point out is that people learn many skills in school that is suitable for your future life. when a person starting a school, he is not familiar with his classmates and do not know how to talk to them. But after a while he learn how to talk and treat with their friend. when he need a help ask them and when his friends need him help them and in other word he learn how to socialize with them. Moreover, he increase his knowledge in a field that is interested in. For example, a student that want to become a doctor need to study a necessary courses and enhance his knowledge about major information in it.
The other reason worth mentioning is that people get prepare for a future job by studying hard in school. There a many ways that help students to get ready for their future jobs. They can go to a field trip about many jobs and become familiar with. For instance, student by going to field trip can learn essential information about jobs and become ready for them. Also they can go to a lab and experiment in a specific field of study. Consider students going to a lab that experiment effect of medicine in some disease in a practical form. By this ways he become interested and ready for a future job that he can do the same experiment.
To summarize, due to learning many skills and become ready for future career it is more important for people to studying hard in school for a prosperous future job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ant than studying hard in school while. Each options have their negetive and positiv...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... that is suitable for your future life. when a person starting a school, he is not f...
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Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...w to talk to them. But after a while he learn how to talk and treat with their friend...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ow to talk and treat with their friend. when he need a help ask them and when his fr...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...need him help them and in other word he learn how to socialize with them. Moreover, h...
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Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'increases'.
Suggestion: increases
...ow to socialize with them. Moreover, he increase his knowledge in a field that is intere...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to study a necessary courses and enhance his knowledge about major information in...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance, student by going to field trip can learn essential information about jobs a...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n about jobs and become ready for them. Also they can go to a lab and experiment in ...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...in some disease in a practical form. By this ways he become interested and ready for...
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Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...periment. To summarize, due to learning many skills and become ready for future ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41017964072 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30179555042 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422155688623 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2585114512 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439948085976 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154978736504 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219719872512 0.0737576698707 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349455151014 0.150856017488 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228310886483 0.0645574589148 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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