TPO 54
The reading specifies that since the evaporation of water is faster than being replaced by rainfall or rivers, the level of salt in the Salton Sea is increasing constantly putting fish and bird populations in danger, and provides three ways to solve this problem. The professor, however, states that solutions are not realistic and practical and refutes them all.
First, based on the reading, one option is to pump water into facilities and after that by heating it, salt and other materials that are dissolved in the water left behind. Then by cooling down the evaporated steam, water is salt-free and is returned to the lake. In contrast, the lecturer explains that this process can cause serious problems. Solid materials that are solved in the water contain chemical and toxic materials. If these materials are spread by the wind in the air, breathing the air by people who work there, can harm them.
Second, the reading proposes that constructing pipelines and bringing ocean water into the lake and since it is less salty than the lake, can decrease the lake's salinity. Nevertheless, based on the professor, governments do not have enough money and resource for building pipelines. The distance of the ocean from the lake is one hundred kilometers which is a long distance and this solution is not possible.
Third, another procedure is to construct walls and divide the lake into multiple sections and in the main section controls and reduces the salinity. On the contrary, the professor states that many geological events happening in the region of the lake. It is plausible that the salinity of the lake is reduced in a short time however if an earthquake happens, the walls will collapse and different sections of water with low salt and high salt will be mixed again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...s salty than the lake, can decrease the lakes salinity. Nevertheless, based on the pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5510694925 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8890767349 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526676838727 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163114225922 0.0996497079465 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136907866297 0.0662205650399 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28784294744 0.162205337803 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717054416348 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.