Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
There are two different schools of thought about lifestyle: Having a safe and calm or a risky way of life. The way I see it, people who take risks can achieve higher success rather than repeating their everyday life methods. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspectives for supporting a risky lifestyle.
The ones who dare experience new conditions learn new things that helps them with bringing in much more success. That does not mean that people who do not take risks never become successful. In fact, this means that the more you take risks, the more you gain and the more you succeed. There is a financial economic theory that supports the same idea in the financial market. It states that risky investments offer higher yields, however, it may also cause greater loss. But as the intrepid person faces with several situations of success or failure, he can consider the all aspects when takes risk and abate the negative results of his decision.
Furthermore, risk and innovation are mutually dependent to each other and if you want your new business to prosper, you should embrace both. That is to say, risk happens when you do something for the first time that you are not familiar with its results, the same as innovation; and using initiative and starting a new business can end up every side of a coin and can fail or thrive. But facing with new events, the same as what Samsung company did, will result in a better consequences. Samsung company's motto was to follow and imitate for a while. Then, it changed its manner after some research on the potential markets in the Europe. Now, its creativity and taking risks bring about a huge change for the company's earnings and profit.
Decisively, prosperous people perform new tasks rather than repeating the things that they knew well. In fact, people's risky operation thrives because they absorb new data and experience new things by taking risks. In addition, creativity and taking risks together provides everyone with success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, as to, in addition, in fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90058479532 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4825784002 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0266886273 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296880440273 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086899505685 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887457721535 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188618159068 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101197161988 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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