T P O 53 Independent writing
Governments take great efforts to improve residents living level and develop our country. They also have to decide which aspects should they costing the most amount of money. Personally speaking, spending money on improving the Internet access are more important than improving the public transportation.
Admittedly, improving public transportation is of importance. It is a big issue to save people time on commuting from home to working place. In addition, it will be quite environmental friendly if a developed public transportation system is developed. Despite this, the public transportation is well enough to many cities, and there is not much space to develop further. As a result, if the government spends a large amount of money on this, may the effect is not apparent and this will contributes to a waste of source.
What's more, spending money to improve Internet access is more necessary and significant than the public transportation. One of the reasons is that Internet is the most important thing in the modern world, and improving the Internet is an effective to keep our country contact to the world. Existing in a information-exploding era, countries around the globe are tightly connected to each other, which is a process through Internet. For example, we are able to do some global communication through the Internet, and we can also interact some aspects from our culture. In this way, spending some money on developing the Internet access is much more needed.
Another reason of Internet's significance is that this is essential to people's quality of life. Through Internet, we can contact with families or friends living far from us; we can conveniently watch a movie or listen to fantastic music; we can also get some online study resources for our self-development. Without Internet, our life will be boring, and we cannot live a such colorful life as today. Internet access is so important that the government are bound to spend some money on it.
To sum up, spending money to improve Internet access is more necessary and significant than the public transportation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-24 | Mamalhastam | 42 | view |
| 2019-09-24 | Mamalhastam | 3 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...he effect is not apparent and this will contributes to a waste of source. Whats more, spen...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...will contributes to a waste of source. Whats more, spending money to improve Interne...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...untry contact to the world. Existing in a information-exploding era, countries ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15249266862 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09174367026 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7343162524 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6111111111 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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