Telecommuting (working for a company from home rather than in the office and communicating with the office by computer) is becoming more and more common. Discuss the advantages of telecommuting versus working in an office. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
In technological innovation century which is twenty first century is making huge impact on modern society in all terms. One of such issues is telecommuting which is defined as a working directly from home being in connection with your work via computers. From my point of view it is better to use this way of working in your everyday life rather than reaching physically your office. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essays.
First of all. notion of working at home is great because you do not need to use transportation. Your work is always with you at home which is convenient to each of us. Instead of wasting your time being in road to your office you can spend beneficially for other activities. Such as making physical training, jogging or reading exciting book. I personally assume that transportation is really gaining much of your time instead working at your own home is effective. Home is a place where you adapted and feel yourself more and more comfortable. As a result, it will bring to high productivity in your job. When you are in transportation you are sole wasting your time expecting your destination, but when you are spending it for your personal development it is far more helpful to you.
Secondly, I consider that working at home is exact thing to conduct family bonding. When you are working at distance in an office your kids will remain without attention, whereas if you are in your home your kids will get enough care which they deserve. Family bonding is helpful activity to your kids. When you are working at home it has more probabilities that interaction between child and his or her parent will happen. From my opinion I guess that kids and parents should frequently make conversation with each other, share with each other their feeling about something. Therefore family bonding will be appropriate for such kind of situations.
To sum up, working at your home is more advantageous rather than it is disadvantages. You will save your time which you are spending on road to your work. Furthermore, family gathering is valid thing to organize with your children..
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- Telecommuting (working for a company from home rather than in the office and communicating with the office by computer) is becoming more and more common. Discuss the advantages of telecommuting versus working in an office. Then indicate which you prefer a 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, i feel, i guess, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82113821138 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7534222092 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506775067751 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4598865258 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8636363636 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273075169707 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920590355023 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746246704485 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195653879539 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129982221621 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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