there is growing influence on the society for the youths.
Youths have always been the future for the nation, but some suggests that young people have fewer influence on society today. As for me, I hold that there is growing influence on the society for the youths.
Admittedly, the youths are too young or less experienced in some aspects of society like politic, but the society may get lots of benefits from the better education or creativity of the youths in many other aspects.
To begin with, young people receive better education. In the past, the youths cannot get to schools because of the poverty of family, but now with the several-decade revolution of education in many countries, it is much more likely for the young people to get in the university. In some countries like China, almost everyone would have a chance to study in schools for nine years. With increasing education background of young people, those countries become more and more powerful today. For example, it starts to use some robots of machines in many industries in China, which can reduce the cost and increase the efficiency at the same time. All of these cannot be imagined in the past, because it is hard to hire some well-educated people to operate or fix those robots, but now lots of university-graduated student can be hired in reasonable prices.
Additionally, the young people are creative. Combining some new or creative ideas with the well-educated background, the young people started to bring the prosperity in many aspects of society. For example, my cousin Joe, aged 25,may be a case to this point. Joe studied at the Sun Yat-sen university and devoted himself to the field of medical research. Recently, he found out a new technology to cure the diabetes together with other young scientists, all of them are less 28 years old. And his research was published in the nature medical research, a famous journal in his study area, and received great reviews from his coworkers. Besides, he has recorded several achievements in this field.
In summary, those knowledgeable and creative youths have a great influence on society today, which shapes the futures of society as a whole.
- Society benefits more from works of great artists than from political leaders Do you agree or disagree with this statement 43
- young people today do not have influence on the important decision for society. 73
- workers are more satisfied with the many different tasks in their jobs rather than with similar tasks. 68
- good qualities of good neighbor 60
- good qualities of good neighbor 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty of the youths in many other aspects. To begin with, young people receive bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, may, so, well, as for, for example, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76464486436 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515406162465 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.513640717 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.764705882 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230656595885 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885670997146 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183361778859 0.0737576698707 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184690064912 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194569686516 0.0645574589148 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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