Healthy living is vital to living well.For that,many factors are responsible for living longer in now a days.In my opinion,i discusses reasons behind it.
we are the age in inventions that it gives so many benefits for living a longer life.First is new innovation in medical field.For instance,there are so many facilities given by medical institutions.Now a days,we are able to fight against diseases.there are so many vaccinations and medicine avilable in market.surgical treatment is also provided to needy patients.secondly,people are getting more aware about fitness.for that many gyms,exercise centers are opened up in cities.The television and media or many more resources start the campaign and showing add for healthy body.Lastly,people do more care about their lifestyle,fitness,food.
On other hand,when people are growing towards new generation stress level also increases due to tight routine life.Today,all are busy in earning money and running blindly behind money,it increases stress leval .Moreover people have more workload in job or business so they have depression,tension n ultimately it affect on their health.now a days,depression is more common mental disorder of world.person feel alone and could not share feelings to others.
To conclude my passage ,many health related problems facing by people in recent but there are so manu solutions for treatment.By use of the medical facilities we are living life in better way and for more years.
- These days people are living longer. Why? 60
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 40
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Being honest is always the best policy in life so you should never tell a lie Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59192825112 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70858253617 2.67179642975 139% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.83005415 48.9658058833 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.75 100.406767564 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.75 20.6045352989 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 5.45110844103 436% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139723543774 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997132352988 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487518864688 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997132352988 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487518864688 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 11.7677419355 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 58.1214874552 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.6 8.01818996416 145% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 10.002688172 320% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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