Tidy students who organized their room are more successful than other students
There are many factors that influence the success of an individ, and the way how they live and their habits are some of these.
Personally , I believe that being and organised, self disciplined person are first steps toward achieving goals.
I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent essay.
First of all,organising your own room build in you good habits, and makes you more trusty to others, which will be very helpful in future, because one of requirements of every employer is being organised, because being organised means being responsible.
my personal experience is a compelling example of this . when I was a student I used to be very organised. it was a habit that my mother taught me. the first thing that I used to do in the morning was fixing my bed, and then organising my room and my notes. my room mates used to laugh with me, because according to them was a waste of time especially during exams season. but I never looked with that eye. I am grateful that my mom taught me that because after I graduate I started a job, and believe me the practical skills especially the organisation was really important for my employer, and that is why they liked me even more ,and they gave me a higher position. so, I am share that if you want to be successful, first start by making your bed.
Secondly, studying and living in a clean cosy place increase your productivity, and reduces stress.
For instance, when I was a first year student, I had a big exam and I was very stressed. so,I started to think that everything was a waste of time during that time, except studying. my room was so messy, and I had forgotten that my mother was coming to visit me from my hometown , when she came, she was shocked of how my room looked. I did not know why I could not concentrate in my studies, but after my mom cleaned the room and organised it for me, soon I realised that my messy room took part on my distraction, and frustrated me more. Since than I made a habit of organising my room, books and my notes.
In conclusion , I am of the opinion that being an organised person, is a sign of the character that signals that you can be successful.
this because cleaning your habitat increase your study ,or work efficiency, and because makes you more trusty to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49523809524 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59709544884 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8995153454 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959281761278 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319577052496 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036345498975 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335769986958 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351629510014 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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