Today with a huge advancement in technology in all aspect of life. people demand on internet is increase. The question is, whether government should fund to improve internet access or public transportation. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some people believe that improve public transportation is paramount factor to decrease traffic and environmental pollution. In my perspective, I concur with statement that internet services have to support by government, especially government has limited finance that not enable it to support both. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, internet is a crucial part in our life, this is mainly due to its importance in education process. today, students can use internet to browse and get many information in all academic subjects. In addition, they can depend on internet to do their assignments and projects. this is a compelling example from my real life, when I was in high school, history teacher asks as to do project. I went to library to find resources to help me in the project. I could borrow only two book which are not enough to me to get a broad information. Therefore, I had to finish with those books, then, returned back before take another. But, today when my son need to do any project, he need a good internet and his device to get a lot of information. especially, his school give as free access to internet which supported by government. as we can see the importance of funding to internet services.
Second, with the improvement of technology, internet can help people in many field which can save their time and money. For example, internet is important in medical field, anyone can use internet to browse and find a good medical center near to him. in this way, he can save time and get treatment as soon as possible. Also, people can buy anything by using internet. Moreover, people can compare quility and prices of product to select a perfect one. So this will help to save time and money.
In conclusion, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. this is based on expositions which are mentioned above. funding internet access is more beneficial in education process. Furthermore, it will help person in saving time and money, because, it will facilitate their shopping or searching for good medical treatment.
Today with a huge advancement in technology in all aspect of life. people demand on internet is increase. The question is, whether government should fund to improve internet access or public transportation. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some people believe that improve public transportation is paramount factor to decrease traffic and environmental pollution. In my perspective, I concur with statement that internet services have to support by government, especially government has limited finance that not enable it to support both. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, internet is a crucial part in our life, this is mainly due to its importance in education process. today, students can use internet to browse and get many information in all academic subjects. In addition, they can depend on internet to do their assignments and projects. this is a compelling example from my real life, when I was in high school, history teacher asks as to do project. I went to library to find resources to help me in the project. I could borrow only two book which are not enough to me to get a broad information. Therefore, I had to finish with those books, then, returned back before take another. But, today when my son need to do any project, he need a good internet and his device to get a lot of information. especially, his school give as free access to internet which supported by government. as we can see the importance of funding to internet services.
Second, with the improvement of technology, internet can help people in many field which can save their time and money. For example, internet is important in medical field, anyone can use internet to browse and find a good medical center near to him. in this way, he can save time and get treatment as soon as possible. Also, people can buy anything by using internet. Moreover, people can compare quility and prices of product to select a perfect one. So this will help to save time and money.
In conclusion, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. this is based on expositions which are mentioned above. funding internet access is more beneficial in education process. Furthermore, it will help person in saving time and money, because, it will facilitate their shopping or searching for good medical treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92039800995 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84910044266 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532338308458 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9889032162 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2592592593 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435124711436 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114179116764 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106256174861 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256493001059 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176212649672 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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