I absolutely believe that we should never judge people based on their external appearances, and can’t think of any rational argument to support the contrary. However, judging people for their appearances is a common mistake that people all over the world do, due to some common misconceptions people have.
It is a widely held belief that someone who dresses well or looks smart is a good person, people make this assumption implicitly without even realising it. There is absolutely zero evidence of any correlation between our external appearance and our characteristics. Infact, when I was very young I was once lost in a crowded area, my parents out of compulsion started asking people around for help. That’s when a home less man came forward to help my parents in finding me, if it wasn’t for that incident such a person would not be judged as a good person if only external appearances mattered.
Another reason why people resort to judging by appearances, is the fear of not understanding the other person. If a person we meet is not of our race or looks differently then we tend to automatically form a negative opinion of him or her. From birth we humans are trained to be defensive in nature, and I believe this defensive nature kicks in when we meet a person who does not confirm to our perspective of how a good person should look.
However, there can be situations where we may need to make an educational guess based on a person’s appearance. For instance, if you are facing a problem at a public place, like loosing your mobile phone, you may have to ask for help from people around. In such a situation our mind will automatically start profiling people around us to find the best candidate to help us, our sole criteria becomes their external appearance. Even in such situations I would recommend not to base your decision on materialistic factors like cloths, watch etc.
The same way as one cannot judge a book by its cover, we cannot judge a person by their external appearance. Every person is different and brings with him or her a lifetime of experience, and I believe its our responsibility to give every one a fair chance to present themselves before jumping to conclusions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ialistic factors like cloths, watch etc. The same way as one cannot judge a book ...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...a lifetime of experience, and I believe its our responsibility to give every one a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83289817232 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90063640457 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.4394311488 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185944400675 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653906552845 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533065332823 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108781155023 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408319222885 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.