Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex,it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex,it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Submitted by imi26 on Sat, 12/31/2016 - 16:20

It’s a famous saying ,Life “It from “b” to “c” from birth to death but what between “b” and “c” so what is a “c”? It is a choice our life is a matter of choices, live well it will never go wrong. As far as, I am concerned I will agree with this statement that modern life is very complex , it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. To support my opinion conspicuous aspects are as fellows.
First of all, Life is the precious gift from God. Now it’s our responsibility to use this gift in a valuable manner. Everything in this universe working in an organized manner. For example sun rises from east and sunset in west ,earth move in a circle. So when I imagine my life without any organization and management so it’s a big slap on human creatures .In this global world life is very complex as compared to ancient times. So fulfill the requirements of the life it is necessary for us to make our life more disciplined.
There is another factor that deserves some words here “Planning”. It’s a famous saying “A goal without a plan is just a wish “.in fact it is the indispensable principal of life. I will support my logic from my personal experience. When I was in 5th grade I had dream to study in abroad. I belonged from the medium family. My family would not be able to afford my expenses in abroad study. But it’s my ambition so I start planning to find the ways which help me in this matter .when I was in 12th grade I join the social welfare programs. Here I met lot of peoples which had resources to support me for getting study visa in USA. Fortunately ,I came in USA for higher education and achieve my goals which I had wished in my childhood.
Last but not least, “thoughts”. Here I code a quotation , “Change your thoughts you change your life”. So at that time we enter in 21st century .life is very critical for us .SO compete with these aspects we should change our thinking ability that will make our life according to this advanced world.
At the end to compile my suggestions which I briefly discussed above, in modern life every person includingme should be organized and well planned .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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It's a famous saying ,Life 'It from 'b' to &apo...
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...atement that modern life is very complex , it is essential for young people to hav...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a valuable manner" with adverb for "valuable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s;s our responsibility to use this gift in a valuable manner. Everything in this universe working in...
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...e sun rises from east and sunset in west ,earth move in a circle. So when I imagin...
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... it's a big slap on human creatures .In this global world life is very compl...
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...t's a big slap on human creatures .In this global world life is very complex...
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... slap on human creatures .In this global world life is very complex as compared t...
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... my logic from my personal experience. When I was in 5th grade I had dream to study...
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...nd the ways which help me in this matter .when I was in 12th grade I join the soci...
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... getting study visa in USA. Fortunately ,I came in USA for higher education and a...
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...;thoughts'. Here I code a quotation , 'Change your thoughts you change y...
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... change your life'. So at that time we enter in 21st century .life is very c...
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...o at that time we enter in 21st century .life is very critical for us .SO compete...
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...st century .life is very critical for us .SO compete with these aspects we should...
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...gme should be organized and well planned .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, so, well, for example, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71788413098 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99350860196 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554156171285 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6441886441 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4347826087 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173086054917 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564280136309 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10844159843 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103357970616 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399171409613 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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