what you should choose between buying a house or buying a business if you got the money?

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... buying a house or buying a business if i got the money, i will definitly choose ...
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...r buying a business if i got the money, i will definitly choose to buy a house.To...
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... i will definitly choose to buy a house.To me , having my own house is the dream ...
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...ll definitly choose to buy a house.To me , having my own house is the dream that ...
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...ose to buy a house.To me , having my own house is the dream that i was chasing al...
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... having my own house is the dream that i was chasing all my life.And i think th...
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...ouse is the dream that i was chasing all my life.And i think there is nothing muc...
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...e dream that i was chasing all my life.And i think there is nothing much better th...
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...eam that i was chasing all my life.And i think there is nothing much better than...
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... much better than realstate investments.To be a house owner is the key to success ...
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... the best achievement in my life. Since i was always dreaming of having a big hou...
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...table for my expanding family. Actually i live with my husband and we have 3 kids...
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...partment which is not appropriate for us . On the other hand my parents, brothers ...
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... the other hand my parents, brothers and sisters they also live in another apartm...
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...t which is very far from our living area .So,in order to visit them every weekend,...
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...which is very far from our living area .So,in order to visit them every weekend, t...
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...ich is very far from our living area .So,in order to visit them every weekend, this...
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...ult for me to drive such a long distance , however my husbands mother is also livi...
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...also living in different apartment alone .So i dreamed that one day i will buy big...
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...so living in different apartment alone .So i dreamed that one day i will buy big h...
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...living in different apartment alone .So i dreamed that one day i will buy big hou...
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...rtment alone .So i dreamed that one day i will buy big house for all of us and my...
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...ing a house is more secure than business .Because business is risky and it really ...
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...g a house is more secure than business .Because business is risky and it really needs s...
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...equires full attention and time from you,in spite of all these you may loose your b...
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... from you,in spite of all these you may loose your business one day and if that happe...
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...ur business one day and if that happened ,in order to sell your business you will ...
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...it much lesser than half of it is actual cost. Therefore buying a house is more p...
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...lesser than half of it is actual cost. Therefore buying a house is more profitable and s...
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...house is more profitable and successful.Once i decided to run a business one day, i ...
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... is more profitable and successful.Once i decided to run a business one day, i ca...
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...ce i decided to run a business one day, i can take a loan from the bank easily ,s...
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..., i can take a loan from the bank easily ,since i am a house owner,they will provi...
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...take a loan from the bank easily ,since i am a house owner,they will provide me w...
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...he bank easily ,since i am a house owner,they will provide me with the money i need i...
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...ner,they will provide me with the money i need it .Suppose this business does not...
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...will provide me with the money i need it .Suppose this business does not work well...
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...ll provide me with the money i need it .Suppose this business does not work well, i wil...
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...ppose this business does not work well, i will sell it any time and return the mo...
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.... In conclusion, for all the reasons i mentioned above, i believe that buying ...
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... for all the reasons i mentioned above, i believe that buying a house for my expa...
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...ily is my great achievement in this life .And the secure choice for a successful f...
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...y is my great achievement in this life .And the secure choice for a successful futu...
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...he secure choice for a successful future .So i suggest that every person should th...
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... secure choice for a successful future .So i suggest that every person should thin...
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...cure choice for a successful future .So i suggest that every person should think ...
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...hould think wisely and invest his money in a secure way, such as buying his own house,than buyi...
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...secure way, such as buying his own house,than buying a risky business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42335766423 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51958187847 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501216545012 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 122.583305008 48.9658058833 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 100.406767564 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 20.6045352989 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 5.5376344086 867% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317180196408 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13490165026 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911857404024 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206580709735 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948164173408 0.0645574589148 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 11.7677419355 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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