There is no doubt that universities and colleges play a vital role in modern society through several manners such as improving science, teaching required industrial abilities, and soaring social skills. Hence supporting these organizations is necessary for all communities. A question can be raised in this regard that is what type of activities in universities and colleges should be supported more. One viewpoint is that because sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries, they should have an equal financial budget and treat the same financially. I agree with this idea and in the ensuing lines, I will delve into 2 reasons to substantiate this point.
The first reason coming to mind is that students who graduate from universities and colleges must be prepared for handling their own life and problems and need some other skills, not just a futile knowledge. Sports and social activities can provide students enough ability to deal with a wide range of situations by doing teamwork tasks, communicating with others and facing new challenges in their life. Take, for instance, the student contributing to holding an event can learn important things about financial, logistic and hospitality aspects of an event which are useful and somehow necessary for individual life and future career.
The second reason is that having sports and social activities help students study better and get higher scores in their courses. Physical activities are vital for doing intelligence activities and student should have opportunities and facilities to do sports to have a good health. For instance, if a student just studies and doesn’t have another activity, s/he will soon get depressed and tired and the temper to argue with everybody. But by being in social events and sports activities, students can share their feelings, listen to other’s experiences and see himself in a group which makes him feel more confident and more energetic.
The third reason which deserves elaboration is that sports and social activities provide a better university life for students. Having social activities and sports make it easier for students to know each other and be friends. Academic environment usually brings a competition situation between students and it is harder to be a close friend with others rather than social events or sports plays where people look for friends and have fun. Doing these activities let students help each other in issues regarding different challenges such as studying and personal matters. Having a good relationship with another student also has a great value for students after their graduation where they can help each other in their careers and businesses.
In summary, all the aforementioned ideas bring us to the conclusion that sports and social activates needs the same attention and financial support like classes and libraries because they are complementary of each other and necessary for having a successful experience during and after the university and college. Thus, let us hope that universities take this issue more seriously.
- TOEFL TPO 45 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 88
- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task 76
- TPO-20 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'futile knowledge'.
Suggestion: futile knowledge
...ms and need some other skills, not just a futile knowledge. Sports and social activities can provi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, regarding, second, so, third, thus, for instance, in summary, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 40.0 13.8261648746 289% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2624.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34419551935 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80767137866 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519348268839 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3029687728 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.105263158 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8421052632 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204800397174 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774184842098 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542602799788 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137699340386 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454117325807 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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