I agree to the fact that sports and social activities really contribute to the growth and success of any insituation and as such, should be giving equal financial support to enhance the growth of the institution.
This is because sports and social activities in any school are interdependent and makes up the core of any institution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... success of any insituation and as such, should be giving equal financial support...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 43.0788530466 7% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 52.1666666667 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 281.0 1977.66487455 14% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 56.0 407.700716846 14% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01785714286 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.73556479973 4.48103885553 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00843838737 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 37.0 212.727598566 17% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 88.2 618.680645161 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169149350543 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129575071922 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522272595786 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129575071922 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522272595786 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 86.8835125448 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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