In my opinion, I agree that sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support at universities and colleges for several reasons.
First, sports and social activities can shape students' character and body which will benefit them in their whole life. To a deep extent, students are not only a machine to create benefit by their knowledge and skills, but the living creature who have feeling and motion and healthy need and spiritual desire. So universities should consider to spent more finance to organize sports and social activities.
Furthermore, students who are trained through multiple aspect abilities may dedicate themselves better to the future company and society. The real evidence identify that although some students gained high credits in class they do not know how to cooperate with others and can not manage their motion well. For a group, sometimes EQ abilities is even more important than IQ.
Finally, sports and social activities may make universities more charming and attractive to fascinate more students coming. Almost all parents and children hope to attend a university providing a comprehensive training so the investment of sports and social activities will make university more successfully.
To sum up, universities should finance equally between sports, social activities and classes, libraries so that it will do good to both universities and students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44247787611 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79897948578 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.838217395 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275210233144 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113758918389 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120916882436 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181683054874 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134151550868 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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