In the lecture, the professor disagrees with the notion of the reading passage for several reasons.
First, in respective to the inconsistency in the passage, the professor displays that the fur collar was added about one hundred years later to improve the painting's value. So in the beginning there is no fur collar and the problem of inconsistence does not exist actually.
Furthermore, following the first reason, if the fur collar was not involved in the original version the argument about light and show disappeared also. And originally the painting has simple and bright light and reflects the realistic scene of the woman.
Finally, the professor demonstrates that the panel of the painting is the same material of other paintings of her. Therefore, the glued panel is valuable because of the special style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...gument about light and show disappeared also. And originally the painting has simple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 22.412803532 13% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1373.03311258 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 133.0 270.72406181 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 4.04702891845 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74931060488 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 145.348785872 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 419.366225166 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.524402142 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25676699337 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108187025243 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570585857723 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134858512105 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588660842058 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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